Monday, January 16, 2012

Can someone proofread my essay?

First, I would take quite strengthened political measures in dealing with North Korea, broadening contacts between two nations. The relationship between North and South is still weak. Though there have been significant steps toward integration, in my own view, these are not up to a sufficient amount. Neither do the separated think each other trustworthy, nor they feel the strong bond of blood which existed in the past, with the current trend of young people to think that unification is unnecessary. Away from race feeling, the main reason I ert the importance of unification of North and South lies on the economic growth gained by united body. One, as South Korea lack of natural resources, the abundant resources of North that remains untouched is exceptionally appealing. Two, by combining the Korean Peninsula as a one m, and connecting it directly to fast-growing countries such as China and Russia, Korea will come into pivotal power through global trade affairs.

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